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Erfahrungsbericht von Frederik

ein paar meiner Texte

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ich versuche, meine Gefühle auszudrücken.

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ich find sie schlecht.

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Da man nur ein Beitrag pro Thema veröffentlichen darf, schreibe ich hier ein paar mehr rein. Hoffe, ihr nehmts mir nicht übel.
Nur noch eine Anmerkung: Auch wenn sie wie Songtexte aussehen, es sind keine.

Und: Anscheinend wird es nicht gern gesehen, wenn jemand auf Englisch schreibt. So leid es mir tut, ich schreibe nunmal auf Englisch, ich habe nichts, das auf Deutsch verfasst ist. Aber was ist so schlimm daran? Wenn es mir doch eher liegt...

The Ghost of 1933

Strange times have reached us here again
The wind has changed, the storm breaks out
Are you really that surprised?
They march again, their banner high
Do you hear the victims cry?

They urge for power, urge for justice
With the gun behind their back
Right hand up high and in the left
They`re holding up the baseball bat
Brown clothes, heavy uniforms
They sing their parols and march on
Following like thousands sheeps
The ghost of 1933.

You`re asking how this all can be
We did nothing but ignore
The signs that indicated this
What is one dead man at all?
Some beaten up and threatened but
Nothing more, you`re telling me
How could we know it ends like this?
I say to you: It was enough
We had the chance to make it right
But as the first cry dimmed our lights
We just closed our eyes to say there`s nothing wrong with us

They urge for power, urge for justice
With the gun behind their back
Right hand up high and in the left
They`re holding up the baseball bat
Brown clothes, heavy uniforms
They sing their parols and march on
Following like thousands sheeps
The ghost of 1933.

We start to run in all directions
Hiding from their death machine
Jews and Muslims, black and white
Also christs try to escape
Cause for the hunters, all we are
Is prey in their holy war.

They urge for power, urge for justice
With the gun behind their back
Right hand up high and in the left
They`re holding up the baseball bat
Brown clothes, heavy uniforms
They sing their parols and march on
Following like thousands sheeps
The ghost of 1933.

You look at me with frightened eyes
The roles have changed, and so have we
You still don`t understand and say
Not long ago, the voices silent, they were the minority

They urge for power, urge for justice
With the gun behind their back
Right hand up high and in the left
They`re holding up the baseball bat
Brown clothes, heavy uniforms
They sing their parols and march on
Following like thousands sheeps
The ghost of 1933.

(das ist eigentlich ohne Auslöser entstanden)

Suicidal Dream

Warm wind blows through my hair
I`m standing higher than the world
Enjoy the sunset, feel the clouds
My arms wide open
I am free

Now I don`t wonder anymore
Why you walked off of me back then
Forget the world, forget my friends
My arms wide open
I am free

For the first time I`m happy
For the first time in my life
The sadness it has gone away
On my face the first real smile

I won`t answer any calls
I won`t turn around no more
It`s too late, too late for me
My arms wide open
I am free

For the first time I`m happy
For the first time in my life
The sadness it has gone away
On my face the first real smile

The time has come, I take the step
My last fall and the journey starts
My journey to eternity
My arms wide open
I am free
I am free

(jaja, Träume...)


No Release

I´m trapped inside this fucking house
A prison that was once a life
Listen to my parent`s fight
Never know what`s in their minds

There is no escape from here
I tried to flee so many times
But everywhere and everyone
I turn to it is all the same

So senseless, meaningless to live
Every hope that`s there sometimes
Is destroyed because I find
No release for me nowhere

How can it be there`s nothing else
Than fighting parents, cheating friends
All the ones that were my hope
Disappear and won`t come back

Why is it impossible to find
Someone who is there to stay
Close my eyes and start to cry
It`s nothing new but still it hurts

So senseless, meaningless to live
Every hope that`s there sometimes
Is destroyed because I find
No release for me nowhere

I`m sending out my last warning
Because I can`t take it anymore
This life`s got lifeless, all that`s left
Is blood and tears
Blood and tears

So senseless, meaningless to live
Every hope that`s there sometimes
Is destroyed because I find
No release for me nowhere


(eigene Erfahrung)

Und das letzte, sonst wirds zu viel:

Memories

You were betrayed so many times
Your life is like a song with rhymes
Everything fits and is repeated
You wonder why you have been cheated

Your brain is full of thoughts like this
The ones you loved the ones you miss
So many people are inside
Make you lose in your own fight

Memories prevent you from
Live your life just like you should
No place for smiles, no room for fun
You can`t let go and can`t go on

There`s just an empty body left
Of all the things you used to be
This emptiness is full of pain
And all you do is to complain

To damn it all that`s over now
But you`ve got to change somehow
I know you`ve tried it really hard
But didn`t move yourself a yard

Memories prevent you from
Live your life just like you should
No place for smiles, no room for fun
You can`t let go and can`t go on

So what`s the sense in staying here?

Memories prevent you from
Live your life just like you should
No place for smiles, no room for fun
You can`t let go and can`t go on

6 Bewertungen, 4 Kommentare

  • darkeye669

    15.05.2002, 12:56 Uhr von darkeye669
    Bewertung: sehr hilfreich

    sehr interessant, aber irgendwie find ich das zu viel

  • kevin_king

    14.05.2002, 17:04 Uhr von kevin_king
    Bewertung: nicht hilfreich

    das ist doch ein deutsches Meinungsforum oder? wenn Du es übersetzt hast bewerte ich es gerne um.

  • Geiler_Typ

    14.05.2002, 16:48 Uhr von Geiler_Typ
    Bewertung: sehr hilfreich

    und in deutsch??aber trotzdem sehr gut

  • Anubis71

    14.05.2002, 16:48 Uhr von Anubis71
    Bewertung: weniger hilfreich

    Sorry, aber wir sind in einem deutschen Forum und dann will ich auch deutsche Gedichte haben. Ich kann zwar gut englisch, sehe aber nicht ein hier englische Gedichte zu bewerten.